editing our story

Here is our edited story.

Things we learnt about were

We aren’t allowed to use then, and, also and because at the beginning of a sentence.

Speech marks go on the OUTSIDE of the full stop or other punctuation.

The end of a sentence can be marked by a full stop, an exclamation mark or a question mark. You don’t need to put an extra full stop after a question mark.

Remember to check ALL capital letters. Sometimes we need to put them in and sometimes we need to take them out.

On Monday 24th September 2018 Room 7 did a blindfold challenge. We wanted to have fun and make our morning a bit interesting by playing a game. 

Firstly Miss Ashley told us the rules which was “no touching the tables or pieces of paper on the floor or you will lose points.“  However you are allowed to touch the chairs because you sometimes have to step over them to get to the end. Next we got into buddies. My buddy was Lucina.  We had to line up by the heater in our buddies. 

First it was my turn to go so Lucina (my buddy)  put the blindfold on me (over my eyes) and helped me to stand up. The blindfold was tight it felt like a constrictor boa on my face. I felt so confused and disorientated because the blindfold was covering my eyes. Lucina told me to “go left, right, straight and step over.” I was feeling nervous and a little bit scared because “what if she was tricking me?“ and I was really doing something silly. I got to the end safely and took my blindfold off.

Next it was my buddies turn so I helped her put the blindfold on. I told her to walk straight first, then next turn left. She doesn’t know her lefts and rights so she went the wrong way.I said “no your other left” and it was a little bit funny. In the end we got to the blue fruit tray and we made it without losing any points!

I think I would like to do this activity again because it was cool to do something different and fun in class especially since it’s the end of the term and I think we are all feeling kind of tired.

Typhoon Jebi

hurricane florence

Bungy VR

At first i felt  indestructible but when i saw the volcano i felt soooo frustrated and terrified because I saw a volcano that was going to  erupt.when i felt the titanum bridge shaking like an earthquake when i looked down the active volcano i felt like a giant was cooking me. When i got launched down the volcano i felt like i was going to die.after that i came rushing up like a boosted jet then  

At first i felt  indestructible but when i saw the volcano i felt soooo frustrated and terrified because I saw a volcano that was going to  erupt.when i felt the titanum bridge shaking like an earthquake when i looked down the active volcano i felt like a giant was cooking me. When i got launched  

At first i felt  indestructible but when i saw the volcano i felt soooo frustrated and terrified because I saw a volcano that was going to  erupt.when i felt the titanum bridge shaking like an earthquake when i looked down the active volcano i felt like a giant was cooking me. When i got launched  

At first i felt  indestructible but when i saw the volcano i felt soooo frustrated and terrified because I saw a volcano that was going to  erupt.when i felt the titanum bridge shaking like an earthquake when i looked down the active volcano i felt like a giant was cooking me. When i got launched  

At first i felt  indestructible but when i saw the volcano i felt soooo frustrated and terrified because I saw a volcano that was going to  erupt.when i felt the titanum bridge shaking like an earthquake when i looked down the active volcano i felt like a giant was cooking me. When i got launched  

At first i felt  indestructible but when i saw the volcano i felt soooo frustrated and terrified because I saw a volcano that was going to  erupt.when i felt the titanum bridge shaking like an earthquake when i looked down the active volcano i felt like a giant was cooking me. When i got launched  

At first i felt  indestructible but when i saw the volcano i felt soooo frustrated and terrified because I saw a volcano that was going to  erupt.when i felt the titanum bridge shaking like an earthquake when i looked down the active volcano i felt like a giant was cooking me. When i got launched  

At first i felt  indestructible but when i saw the volcano i felt soooo frustrated and terrified because I saw a volcano that was going to  erupt.when i felt the titanum bridge shaking like an earthquake when i looked down the active volcano i felt like a giant was cooking me. When i got launched  

At first i felt  indestructible but when i saw the volcano i felt soooo frustrated and terrified because I saw a volcano that was going to  erupt.when i felt the titanum bridge shaking like an earthquake when i looked down the active volcano i felt like a giant was cooking me. When i got launched  

At first i felt  indestructible but when i saw the volcano i felt soooo frustrated and terrified because I saw a volcano that was going to  erupt.when i felt the titanum bridge shaking like an earthquake when i looked down the active volcano i felt like a giant was cooking me. When i got launched  

At first i felt  indestructible but when i saw the volcano i felt soooo frustrated and terrified because I saw a volcano that was going to  erupt.when i felt the titanum bridge shaking like an earthquake when i looked down the active volcano i felt like a giant was cooking me. When i got launched  

At first i felt  indestructible but when i saw the volcano i felt soooo frustrated and terrified because I saw a volcano that was going to  erupt.when i felt the titanum bridge shaking like an earthquake when i looked down the active volcano i felt like a giant was cooking me. When i got launched  

At first i felt  indestructible but when i saw the volcano i felt soooo frustrated and terrified because I saw a volcano that was going to  erupt.when i felt the titanum bridge shaking like an earthquake when i looked down the active volcano i felt like a giant was cooking me. When i got launched  

At first i felt  indestructible but when i saw the volcano i felt soooo frustrated and terrified because I saw a volcano that was going to  erupt.when i felt the titanum bridge shaking like an earthquake when i looked down the active volcano i felt like a giant was cooking me. When i got launched  

At first i felt  indestructible but when i saw the volcano i felt soooo frustrated and terrified because I saw a volcano that was going to  erupt.when i felt the titanum bridge shaking like an earthquake when i looked down the active volcano i felt like a giant was cooking me. When i got launched  

At first i felt  indestructible but when i saw the volcano i felt soooo frustrated and terrified because I saw a volcano that was going to  erupt.when i felt the titanum bridge shaking like an earthquake when i looked down the active volcano i felt like a giant was cooking me. When i got launched  

At first i felt  indestructible but when i saw the volcano i felt soooo frustrated and terrified because I saw a volcano that was going to  erupt.when i felt the titanum bridge shaking like an earthquake when i looked down the active volcano i felt like a giant was cooking me. When i got launched  

At first i felt  indestructible but when i saw the volcano i felt soooo frustrated and terrified because I saw a volcano that was going to  erupt.when i felt the titanum bridge shaking like an earthquake when i looked down the active volcano i felt like a giant was cooking me. When i got launched  

natural dissasters

Least dangerous vs. Most dangerous


We chose to pick the Most dangerous


on the right because they can kill people in different ways.


We picked the earthquake on the Least dangerous because it can kill people but we think it on both because it is dangerous and sometimes not.




Starts underground vs. above


We think that the right ones are underground because the magma has to go throw the tectonic plates.


We think the left one are above but not the tsunami because earthquakes start it.





Wind vs. no wind


I think tsunami have no wind because tsunamis happen by earthquakes.


I think hurricanes have wind because its been made of water and air.


I think tornadoes have wind because it needs strong winds,hot air and cold





Water vs. no water


I think it's a great idea to put the volcano on no water because volcano’s don't need air


I think the left ones are water because they all have water.

weather questions

Focuses for writing this week	Explanation in my own words.
Where do speech marks go	Before and after
How to put in other punctuation	Before the speech marks
When to start a new line or when to keep writing	Under the dialog
Different words for ‘said’	Respond,said,respond politely,yield,gasped,
Adding adverbs

EXAMPLES

“Who can I pick on?” asked Miss Ashley.

“Me” replied Timote.

“How was your day?” asked Hope.

“Great, thank you” replied Miss Ashley.

“How was your weekend” asked Dwyane.

“It was good” responded Havea.

If more than one person is talking, you put the reply underneath.

Mary was a beautiful girl who was wearing her long black hair in two plaits. She asked her mum, “can I go to the pools today?”.

“Why do you want to go” mum replied.

“It’s hot and I want to cool off”.

“Fine then”

If it’s only one person, you keep going.

Little red riding hood walked along the dirt path and thought to herself “I’m getting hungry”. She had walked a looooonng way but the thought of warm apple pie when she got to grandma’s house kept her going.

MY GROUP’S EXAMPLE.

“Do u like chickens?” asked stanley as he drank his tea .

“Yes I do I eat them” Responded Havea.

“No it’s not healthy for you” said  Keru as he ate a cake .

“Oh ok is vegetables healthy “ yelled stanley.

“Yes is that a stupid question” Havea said politely.

“Of Course it’s healthy” said Keru.

“Do you play Fortnite?” Havea Said.

“Change subject” As Stanley rolled his eyes.

“I play it on my ipad 2” replied keru.

“What is your username?” Stanley asked.

“Keruazap that’s my username” said keru.

“Mine is XxCortezzJadenxX” as Havea Drank tea.``

“Mine is STANFACE034”replied Stanley.

“Did u know that there is a new game it’s called battlelands” replied keru

“ That must be cool” Havea said with an Exciting Face